PMU Pokebook

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Enjoy. This is a pokemon Facebook that will be typed about how Foxy sees it, pokebook war will come and go, will people get hacked and deactivated? getting deactivated is like dying. Watch who you make friends with. Rated PG13. Sign up here -> http://pmuniverse.net/forums/viewtopic.php?f=68&t=10384

[spoilerUsernames:2os4a767]Lazy Fox = Foxy
No One = Mark
AngelicGuardian729 = Jeanette
CrazyHydra13 = chacoat
Prince Leo = Leo
MoonlitLighthouse44 = Jermiah
StarlightWonders2 = Ava
Finest Perfection = Celeste
Sw1mSwimSw1mma = Eradi
Lightning = ???
King Nico = Nico
Warrior Alice = Alice

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username: Lazy Fox
password: LazyFox
email: .LazyFireFox@yahoo.com 
(all info is fake)

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"Ahh... Time to turn on the computer and check my Page...." Foxy said as the screen continued loading.

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[b]Lazy Fox:[/b] What the-  :cry:  how nice. I have no people to like meee wahhhh!!
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[b]Lazy Fox:[/b] WAHHHH my Pokebook hates meeee!!! 
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[b]Lazy Fox:[/b] HEEEEELLLPPP!!  :cry:  :cry: 
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[b]AngelicGuardian729:[/b] Foxy, you do know that some user is trolling you right~?  :la:  Its quite funny~ <3
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[b]Lazy Fox:[/b] WHAT  :cry: I feel so stupid.....
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[b]AngelicGuardian729:[/b] Awww poor Foxy~!  Well maybe next time you will know better. <3  :la:  :la: 
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[b]Lazy Fox:[/b] bksb-ovmja09ivbnds809beru-ba9 n-uga[jvmar-89bgnhm=9rehjgna8u9gbnawegbhnee7u8-9aijwnmfu
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[b]AngelicGuardian729:[/b] Seems like Foxy fell asleep on the key board again~ <3  :la:  :la:  :la:  Silly little fox!  :la: 
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Whatcha think? Ill be posting more once I get more sign ups.

this is only an introduction.
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I was told to tell you that zweilous’ heads have different thoughts so… one of them is the competitive one and the other is the timid one. that is all continue.

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This is great so far! Keep it up!

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username: Lazy Fox
password: LazyFox

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“Ahhh! i need to get more people to help me! My berry farm is dying!” Foxy says as she waited for Pokebook to load.

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Quick!! Someone send me some water packs! Im out of water for my oran berries!!!
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Lazy Fox: Someone respond to my requests!! Im trying to save some berry lives here!
Posted 45 minutes ago. AngelicGuardian729, No One, CrazyHydra13, Prince Leo liked this!

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CrazyHydra13: Foxy aren’t you still on Lv 2 for Pokemon Harvest? HA! I’m alread Lv 15!
Posted 44 minutes ago. AngelicGuardian729, No One, Prince Leo liked this!

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Lazy Fox: WHAT! Nuuuu! :cry: Jeanette!! Please send me some water packs!! Its life and death here!
Posted 42 minutes ago. Angelic Guardian729, CrazyHydra13, Prince Leo liked this!

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AngelicGuardian729: Foxy calm down~ Its only a game, but I guess i’ll send you a water pack. :la:
Posted 40 minutes ago. Lazy Fox, CrazyHydra13, Prince Leo liked this!

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CrazyHydra13: :( No fair! I’ve sent you requests everyday to help me Jeanette! I feel betrayed :cry:
Posted 40 minutes ago. Lazy Fox Liked this!

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AngelicGuardian729: Don’t be like that! I’ll send you some items too. Dx
Posted 37 minutes ago. CrazyHydra13 liked this!

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Lazy Fox: FINALLY! After 6 hours of playing i got to Lv 15! HA!
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CrazyHydra13: D< Oh ya? Well I’m already Lv 20! Btw, mind sending me some oran berries? Some buizels ate mine :cry:
Posted 49 minutes ago. Lazy Fox liked this!

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Lazy Fox: :cry: Stop leveling up and let me pass you up! Oh sure. Hold on let me send you some…
Posted 46 minutes ago. CrazyHydra13 liked this!

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CrazyHydra13: Phew! Thanks Foxy! I’ll send you some pechas as a thank you!
Posted 44 minutes ago. Lazy Fox liked this!

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AngelicGuardian729: Weren’t you guys just arguing~? Kinda funny how you both are helping each other~<3 :la: :la:
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Lazy Fox: …
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CrazyHydra13: …
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Prince Leo: Foxy-Chan, Calm down :( Your going to explode! Take deep breaths… Deep breaths.
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AngelicGuardian729: Leo, Foxy isn’t at the computer right now. <3 She is outside town breathing fire like a madman. While chacoat is also using dragonbreathe on things. :la:
Posted 8 minutes ago. No One, Prince Leo liked this!

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No One: Well Foxy fell asleep outside, and chacoat is still raging.
Posted 5 minutes ago. AngelicGuardain729, Prince Leo liked this.

The more people we get the longer these will be. Oh yes, everyone lives in grassroot. PMU is the game where they can play as virtual pokemon, like themselves so ya.

Kirk strikes again >:O

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Still looking good. :o But you mixed up the location of the 7 and the 2 mixed up in Jeanette’s username. XD

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Ah! im sorry Dx

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“Im so tired from training… Maybe Pokebook will cheer me up.” Foxy smiled at this thought, thinking of the many friends she met online.

username: Lazy Fox
password: LazyFox

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You have 52 notifications from CrazyHydra13

WHAT THE- Stop spamming me with requests for the games D<
Posted 3 hours ago. Like. Share. Comment
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CrazyHydra13: Foxy come on! I only need some berries and wooden planks! 4 of each isnt too much to ask for!
Posted 3 hours ago. No One, Prince Leo AngelicGuardian729 liked this!

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Lazy Fox: YOUR CRAZY!!!
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Sw1mSwimSw1mma: Both of you shut up. I already know how this will end for both of you. Annoying much? <3 <3 <3
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Prince Leo: Dont pick on my Foxy-Chan D:
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Finest Perfection: We all need to calm down, and CrazyHydra13 why send 52 requests?! I would go insane also!
Posted 2 hours ago. AngelicGuardian729, Sw1mSwimSw1mma, Prince Leo, and 2 others liked this!

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Lazy Fox: Sorry Finest ;n;
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CrazyHydra13: Sorry…
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Finest Perfection: It’s okay. By the way, whose the troll called, ‘No One’?
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AngelicGuardian729: :la: Thats Mark. He’s really quiet and just prefers to like things~! <3
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Prince Leo: Changing topic here… Foxy-Chan, want me to send you some items for your harvest game? <3
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Lazy Fox: …no ty. im getting a little bored using pokebook for some reason. maybe because im getting tired…
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Prince Leo: D: My darling Foxy, your not considering death right?! </3
Posted 50 minutes ago. No One, AngelicGuardian729, CrazyHydra13, and 4 others liked this!

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Lazy Fox: NO! i wouldnt dare… and stop calling me darling that a little creepy…
Posted 47 minutes ago. StarlightWonders2, MoonlitLighthouse44, AngelicGuardian Liked this!

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AngelicGuardian729: Foxy, I hope you don’t giveup on Pokebook We all would miss you so much.
Posted 44 minutes ago. Lazy Fox, Prince Leo, MoonlitLighthouse44 and 5 others liked this!

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Prince Leo: Mostly me :cry:
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MoonlitLighthouse44: fixu plsdee dint labce poikbilk we wuold msis yuo spppp muvj
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Sw1mSwimSw1mma: Anyone understand what Lighthouse just said?
Posted 34 minutes ago.MoonlitLighthouse44, StarlightWonders2, Prince leo, and 3 others liked this!

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StarlightWonders2: He said: Foxy, Please dont leave Pokebook. We would miss you soooo much.
Posted 32 minutes ago. Lazy Fox Liked this!

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CrazyHydra13: …That moment when you finally understand a sentence only to have someone post a translation and you just wasted time figuring it out. :cry:
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Lazy Fox: You all care so much… ;u; i wouldnt think about leaving. i feel so loved and needed…<3
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CrazyHydra13: Course your important! Without you, I cant level up in Poke Ranch without you! :’( I still need wooden planks.
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Prince Leo: errr… Foxy-Chan! Ignored this ^^^^ He doesnt mean it!!
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Sw1mSwimSw1mma: Now you’ve done it! Foxy will be bothering me about this! </3
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AngelicGuardian729: Everythings not about you Swim~ Think of others. <3
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Crazyhydra13: Yo foxy! I Ain’t getting any planks over here! …Foxy?
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Users Online:
No One,
AngelicGuardian729,
CrazyHydra13,
Sw1mSwimSw1mma
Finest Perfection
Prince Leo
MoonlitLighthouse44
StarlightWonders2

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Users Offline:
Lazy Fox

Prince Leo: You made my darling Foxy log off. :cry:
Posted a few seconds ago.

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The chapters are getting lengthier. :3

I smiled at Jermiah’s comment. X3

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This is really fun to read, Foxy! Keep up the good work! :D

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ty red, more to come. ready for… pokebook war? >:D this is where some hackers may enter.

i try my best to post a chat almost everyday, but i havent posted one then that means im working on it because these really do take a long time considering i type everything and not copy and edit some parts.

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“People have been telling me that PokeBook is entering some kind of war? Probably some stupid trick to get accounts deleted.” Foxy said yawning as she walked over to her computer and pressed the on switch with her nose.

username: Lazy Fox
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whats all this about some stupid PB war? Foxy disapproves.
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MoonlitLighthouse44: ta rhid est os diobud i wodh ot wiplf rnf
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Lazy Fox: …what?
Posted 4 hours ago. No One, StarlightWonders2, AngelicGuardian729 and 4 others liked this!

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StarlightWonders2: LightHouse said: ‘Ya, This war is stupid. I wish it would end.’
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CrazyHydra13: AGAIN?! Man, I wasted brain cells trying to figure it out, and Starlight can easily translate it :cry: But no offense LightHouse, it’s kinda hard to read your sentences.
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MoonlitLighthouse44: u imfrtsysnd utd gstd to yoee sinrtumed
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Lazy Fox: translation plz, then back to the PB war topic.
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StarlightWonders2: He said: ‘I understand, it’s hard to type sometimes.’ I can’t blame him, his hands/paws are too big to hit the correct keys sometimes.
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CrazyHydra13: I giveup trying to figure out what he means.
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AngelicGuardian729: Back on topic now~ This all started with some users talking about how weak pokemon take most of the strong job requests leaving several weak ones for the high ranks. I disagree, the high ranks should get to the mission board early then. <3
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Sw1mSwimSw1mma: Hey, They have a point. <3 I mean, come on. Do weak pokemon really do need to take all the higher ranked missions?! I’m barely getting any missions. D:<
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Lazy Fox: I must disagree with you Swim. these ‘weak’ pokemon are smarter then you think…
Posted 3 hours ago. Prince Leo, AngelicGuardian729, No One, and 4 others liked this!

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Prince Leo: I agree with Foxy. <3
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Finest Perfection: You always agree with Foxy Leo~ its actually cute how you like her.
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CrazyHydra13: He liiiikes her! >:3
Posted 2 hours ago. Prince Leo, MoonlitLighthouse44 Sw1mSwimSw1mma and 5 others liked this!

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Lazy Fox: e,e back on topic. anyone even know who started complaining?
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Lightning: Hey losers. You all aren’t taking the high rank requests right?
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CrazyHydra13: Wow, that was down-right rude. The requests are for everyone. If they weren’t, don’t you think they would charge poke for missions to be accepted if they werent for everyone??? >:(
Posted 2 hours ago. Lazy Fox, Prince Leo, AngelicGuardian729, and 6 others liked this!

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King Nico: Oh shut up. Wanna say that to my face 4 eyes? Because i will battle you in the REAL arena right now.
Posted 2 hours ago. Warrior Alice, Lightning, Sw1mSwimSw1mma liked this!

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CrazyHydra13: S-sorry…
Posted 1 hour ago. King Nico liked this!

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Warrior Alice: HA. You all should stick to PMU online and leave the REAL PMU missions to us.
Posted 1 hour ago. Sw1mSwimSw1mma, King Nico, Lighting liked this!

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Prince Leo: Stop encouraging them Swim >:( Not everything is about you.
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Sw1mSwimSw1mma: EXCUSE YOU?! I think the Fox stalker should shut up. These guys are right. Its annoying how I always end up with e ranked missions. </3
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Finest Perfection: I think we all should calm down… Fighting isn’t suppose to be on PokeBook. :’(
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Lightning: Ya, i suppose your right… Fighting is suppose to be in the REAL arena. SO THEN! Which one of you ‘strong’ weaklings wanna fight? Me vs. You. One on One.
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Lazy Fox: ill accept that challenge.
Posted 54 minutes ago. King Nico, Lightning, Prince Leo, and 4 others liked this!

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Prince Leo: Foxy-Chan! It isn’t worth it!
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Lazy Fox: It is worth it. I cant have some idiot come to MY page and start calling my friends weaklings. So Lightning. Name the time.
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Lightning: Aren’t you brave. Time: Right now. Im curious, what rank are you…?
Posted 35 minutes ago. Lazy Fox, Warrior Alice, King Nico, and 2 others liked this!

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Lazy Fox: Ultimate rank and im heading over there now. Guys i promise ill teach him a lesson.
Posted 32 minutes ago. AngelicGuardian729, MoonlitLighthouse44, StarlightWonders2, and 3 others liked this!

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MoonlitLighthouse44: o gpoe ficy eokl vtimg ys s wkm
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Warrior Alice: What the hell did he just say???
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StarlightWonders2: LightHouse said: “I hope Foxy will bring us a win.” Also, No One! Your siding with these guys?!
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No One: Ummm… Yeah. :)
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AngelicGuardian729: Your a traitor then~ :la:
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Prince Leo: Has anyone heard from Foxy?! They closed the arena so only those two can fight alone! I’m REALLY worried D:
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Finest Perfection: Calm down Leo. I’m sure Foxy is winning. :) The fox may be lazy, but is really strong when she needs to be
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Lighting: HA! That wimp didnt stand a chance. I finished the battle so quick I think I was quicker then quick attack. hahahaha!!
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AngelicGuardian729: F-Foxy lost?! Where is she!?
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Lighting: I don’t know, my thunder sent her flying through the roof, so Arceus knows where she landed. Probably flew all the way to Taren… Hehehe
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Prince Leo: F-Foxy-Chan…
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Lightning: HAHAHAHA!!! So idiots, if I see anyone one of you go near the mission board, you will end up like the weak fox.
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Finest Perfection: Foxy…
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Meanwhile off of Pokebook…

Foxy rose to her paws, growling a storm of anger. She glared at the shadowy figure that stood infront of her laughing.

“Grrr… This isn’t over yet!” She growled darkly as she began shaking off the static that made her red fur all fuzzy. Then Foxy began to blindly charge at the shadowy foe. Blinded by rage, she released a powerful Flamethrower directly at the figure. The figure let out a cry of pain, and collpased to the ground with a loud thud.

“Yeah, I’m not the weakling here.” She muttered angrily as she glared daggars at the Pokemon who laid fainted beside her. Foxy slowly turned around, looking in every direction Her brown eyes clouded with worry.

‘Which way is home though…?’ Foxy thought, as she began running through the dark woods, searching for any towns close by.

Tell me if you see any errors, or typos. This literally took 2 hours to make. Thank you Red for helping with the last part. :joy:

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…Wow, things just got REAL. This is really, really suspenseful, Foxy. Great job. And you want us to point out errors? Well, since it’s the internet, they’re bound to have a typo here or there; it’s realistic. However…

Foxy stood up, shaking off the static that made her fur all fuzzy. “Grrr…This isnt over just yet!” She yelled as she ran toward a shadowy figure firing a flamethrower directly at it, KOing it. “Ya, I’m not a weakling.” She muttered as she looked at the pokemon who laid fainted beside her. ‘Which way is home though…’ She thought.

So, as soon as Foxy starts talking, you should hit enter, and “She” shouldn’t be capitalized. A bit more description would also be nice. You might try “charged” instead of “ran”. Also, “Ya” should be “Yeah”, “isnt” should be “isn’t”, and you could throw in a few commas here and there, so that it looks like this:

Foxy rose to her paws, shaking off the static that made her brown fur all fuzzy.

“Grrr…This isnt over just yet!” the Vulpix growled as she furiously charged toward a shadowy figure, firing a flamethrower directly at it. The figure let out a cry of pain before passing out on the spot.

“Yeah, I’m not a weakling,” she muttered angrily as she glanced down at the Pokemon who lay fainted beside her. Foxy turned around, looking in every direction Her brown eyes clouded with worry. Which way is home, though…? she thought.

Keep it up! You’re updating faster than I’ve seen anyone do before! :joy:

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Thank you Red! I do my best to update. Ill update the bottom part, ty again, hahaha i was typing and getting too into it.

/coughnoticesomeoneintheeviltriomissingcough/

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I like the description you added to that last part. Good job! :>:D:

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It’s always fun to see a nice twist on words instead of just lengthy paragraphs. c:

Keep up the good work! But most importantly, have fun!

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Thanks Agui

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Im sorry for not posting anything. I’ve gotten like a bag-full of homework, im not joking. So its already 10pm. and i got to get up early for a field trip tommorrow, ill make sure the next chat is long, to make up for todays missing chat.
It might be late because ill be getting home late.

-foxy1

ALSO! ill give you all a small chat then.

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I miss Foxy-chan, i havent heard nor seen from her in 3 days. Her account is still active though…
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No One: Her own fault for taking the battle request.
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Prince Leo: Get the hell out of my wall Mark! Your a traitor to us >:(
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King Nico: Awww the baby kitty is getting mad, im so scared. HA >:D LOSER!
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Prince Leo: …Get. Out. Now. Better yet. I’ll log out. At least I know i can talk the talk and walk the walk.
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King Nico: OH HELL NO. HE DID NOT JUST GO THERE! :rage:
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It’s okay if you don’t update super-duper-often, Foxy. We’re patient. :P Besides, your story is awesome to make up for it. So don’t get too worried about it. :joy:

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I hope this doesn’t die. ;-; It’s really good so far!

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Dont worry, im working on another chat post on another tab. its taking a while because im trying to figure out what should happen and how to include the other characters. i promise one will be posted today.