Pokemon: And the Dark Castle [Sign Up&Discussion]

Alright. Here’s the dish.

It’s Ryriko, you know. And I’m here making an RP to pass the time. Let’s just hope no one forgets to post. Because we have about 60% of the RPs here either stink or are abandoned. I don’t intend this to happen to this one.

Now pardon if I’m cliche. Here’s the Story. I guess you could call it that.

“I remember that day vividly. I smell the crisp fresh air, and I could see the wet dew that lay on the grass just below me.” The King would say as he looked down apon his Kingdom from the sky. “This day is so similar to then.” Descending, just barely touching the tip of the castle, he rang the bell, which signaled the villagers that they were about to hear a Legend. The townspeople would drop their work and sit by the smooth-rocked floor that led up the the castle. Little Pokemon Children layed on their back to see the king. Some getting distracted by the most beautiful and well crafted castle. Marble collumns and marvelous fountains decorated the outer part of the castle. The castle itself was even more astonishingly beautiful. It had handmade stained glass windows, well-crafted stone steps, and reached towards the heavens.The prestiegous marvel was hand made by the King himself. He engraved all 649 Pokemon into the very being. The castle was made with a material that would decay in a time far far in the distant future.

It was hard to believe that just ten years ago it was almost destroyed.

“Long Ago there was a force called “The Deities of Evil.” This force brought the world into sheer darkness, kidnapped the souls of my dearest pokemon, and sent the world into near-oblivion.”
Several gasps passed through the aduience.
“However. The Dieties of Evil were no match for the 12 Guardians of Life. These Guardians banded together in a last ditch effort to save me and my Kingdom. And they succeeded by obtaining the Light of the Universe. This is their story…” And he would cough, signalling the fellow pokemon below him to be quiet.

There you have it. A somewhat well written dramatic intro to the story.
As you read, there are 12 Guardians of Life. That means only 12 People will sign up so we can keep track of this mayhem. Er hem. Here’s the sheet:

Name:
Gender:
Pokemon:
PROOVE THAT YOU CAN RP WELL BY SUBMIITING A PARAGRAPH, DON"T TAKE ONE FROM AN OLD STORY. AND DON"T PLAGERISE. Freakin" Raccoons.

People Signed Up:
Ryriko - Azelf - Genderless, but is called male.

Sinacar - Shiny Leafeon [Golden] - Female

Astral - Shiny Gabite - Female

Bird - Pupitar - Male

Coy - Absol - Male

Kin Kizu - Shiny Mudkip [Golden] - Male

Flare - Flareon - Male

Valiance (Val) - Shiny Braviary - Male
ABOUT MOVELISTS.

We"re any level we wanna be as long as it"s 50 or below.
We" know four moves, we can learn any move within our TM, Breeding, and Normal movelists, and also from any Pokemon game that is in the Trainer or PMD universe.
(Colleseum, XD, the Rescue teams, those types are welcome)

But Ricu! What if something like this happens?!
“And then the Alakazam used his psychic powers to lift the water from the lake and throw it at the flame charged Flareon!”

That is acceptable. I feel bad for the Flareon though.

Name:Kevin Lolz :lol:
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Swampert FOREVAH :twisted:

EDIT: i think i am the first

Name: Astral
Gender: Female
Pokemon: Shiny Gabite
Level: 39
Moves: Flamethrower, Dragon Pulse, Stone Edge, Secret Power.


Ignis growled a the demon that stood before her. It’s body was masked in a dark green cape, but he was certainly taller than any two legged she had seen.
“Utter Rubbish” She spat.

The creature just gave a toothy grin, and that’s when she noticed them.
From under the hood shone two magnificent yellow rings. Two hoops of gold within black pits. It was a ghostly sight and she couldn’t help but stare into them.

“Are you sure you want to turn me down so quickly?” His words carried the very being of death with them, he may as well have been speaking of unicorns and rainbows, even that would have put chills through the souls of even the strongest of explorers.

Saber Fangs… Was all she could think… Two perfect, ivory white fangs hung from each side of his mouth.
The right fang was almost fully cloaked by the shadow the cape draped upon it, but she knew it was there, she could practically feel them piercing her lungs as her eyes refused to look away.

As she realized, the rumors were true. This was the demon she saw so many years ago, the one she had tried so hard to slay. The one who taught her the meaning of pain, the one who delivered the pain of loneliness.
He was the one behind the Silver-Birch massacre.

She knew that she would one day have her chance…she just never dreamt that it would be like this.

I couldn’t think of anything interesting to say…

how shall i prove that i can rp?

Name:Flare
Gender:male
Pokemon:flareon

ooooh, ricu. you know me! i can totally RP!

Name: Sinacar (look, i’m stuck on names, alright?)
Gender: F
Pokemon: (what do you think?) golden Leafeon

Edit:
Level: 44 (double numbah, and giga drain…)
Moveset: Giga drain, Synthesis, Shadow chill, Razor leaf.

Another Edit: do i have to edit my test- thingy now? x-x

YET ANOTHER DARN EDIT: (i’m gonna use 2 TMs as soon as i post. -.-) ok, in the RP, i will steadily be leveling up… so ya. blarg. according to ricu, i get 2 lvs every 5 pages… so, this is what i plan to do…:

lv 57(at page 20):
Grasswhistle, Swords dance, shadow chill, aerial ace

LV 71 (page 28, i think):
Leaf blade, Swords dance, Shadow chill, Aerial ace

Might add more later.

I’ll give it a shot…

Name: Bird (I too suffer from non-creative-name-itis. See uncreative name for fake disease as reference.)
Gender: Male
Pokémon: Pupitar
Level: Somewhere around 47 or 48.
-Earthquake
-Rock Slide
-Hyper Beam
-Sandstorm

As for a sample…

Seth stared at the wild Scyther. He’d been searching for one for what seemed like ages. However, his Charmeleon made catching it a problem. “Alright, Char. Try to take it easy, okay? We want to catch this one.” Charmeleon nodded in response, before unleashing a flurry of fiery attacks. Seth watched, horrified, and tried to call out for the pokémon to stop. Sadly, it was too late… The Scyther had been burnt to a crisp.

bIIIRD.
His name was Seth and then Wes? What is this, black magic?! Unless you mean we~

And you guys, yes, even you Sin, have to put an example of RP.

Not much, just a paragraph.

wh-what? riku, WHY!? WHHYYYYYYYY!?
… oh, alright… (mutter… mumble… carrumbah…)
here!

sinacar woke up.

there!.. oh, wait you want at least a paragraph? … fine. i’ll give you it… probably more…

Sinacar woke up. She was lying on a little fluffy bed. She was comfortable, just lying on the bed, but she got up anyway, then glanced around. The surprisingly comfortable bed was in what seemed to be a jail cell, with the metal bars and everything. And it was extremely dark outside the bars. Two illusionary swords appeared above her, slashing each other, then fading. Then, she sliced at the bars with a sword-like leaf, to no affect. Sinacar stared at the bars, wondering how they had defended against the boosted move, when a typhlosion walked up to them.

“Well, well, look what we have here! A little leafeon… oh, this will be fun…” said the Typhlosion, shooting a tiny, mock ember through the bars.

“So, i see you’ve been trying to break through this reinforced titanium bars. well, we have good punishment for those who try to-” he began, turning around and reaching for something, however, i shot a not-so-mocking razorleaf through the bars, hitting him right under his head-flames.

“OH, you little…!” yelled the typhlosion, and was about to attack…

sorry, gotta leave you at a cliffhanger! >:D
however, i plan on using this post if we ever get into a jail or something…

Name:Coy
Gender:M
Pokemon: Absol
PROOVE THAT YOU CAN RP WELL BY SUBMIITING A PARAGRAPH, DON’T TAKE ONE FROM AN OLD STORY. AND DON’T PLAGERISE. Freakin’ Raccoons.

  • Coy work up to the sweet smell of honey. The direction of the smell is uncertain, but it was a great way to start a morning. However, it’s time to get serious. Coy knows that he has to be at Coldbrooke Town, but he does not know why nor the time he has to be there. He has no memory of Coldbrooke Town, only of the neighboring town of Ricuville. Ricuville seemed good enough, the people were nice, the food was good, and he went their for vacation- with Prince- when he was younger. So, coldbrooke shouldn’t be so bad if it’s near Ricuville. There is one small problem though, Coy is a private detactive(Ooc: made it up, he is not in the actual rp) so he can only expect the worse. In the middle of his wondering, Coy takes the trail leading to Coldbrooke Town, only thinking about the posibilities of why he’s there; neglecting the more imporant thing of what time he should be there. *

Name: Kin(first name) Kizu(Last name)
Gender:Male
Pokemon: Mudkip (Golden)
PROOVE THAT YOU CAN RP WELL BY SUBMIITING A PARAGRAPH, DON’T TAKE ONE FROM AN OLD STORY. AND DON’T PLAGERISE. Freakin’ Raccoons. [b]“Strange? how” the suspense was killing me! “People were found dead in their house ,DEAD, all of them.They also had a note next to them, saying that the portals of somethinga mabober are opening!” he said it with a smile, that I thought was weird.

“Man Ry, you do know they’re fake stories?” I stopped and took a sharp right. “Goin’ to the Video game store eh kizy?”. I did like Video games but so did Ry. We normally met with D.J. and Kabo. They were lucky that their teacher let them out 12 minutes earlier to leave school. [/b]

aight.

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Cub smirked,he had just defeated Yamato No Orochi,the dark version of the god pokemon,Arceus.

“heh…” cub said as he jumped back,slamming his sword into the ground.

“Grr…No! Wait! Ill change my ways!” Orochi yelled at Cub,hoping this false show of surrender would allow Cub to let him live.

“NO CHANCE!” cub yelled,glowing red. “RISE UNDEAD! JAKU KUMA! RISE DEMONS OF THE UNDERWORLD!” Cub yelled.

Skeletons began to rise around Cub. The Sky turned dark, the clouds swirled like a black hole.
A gigantic hand rose out of the ground and slammed down on Orochi.

“NO! YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS KUMANO! YOU WILL PAY!” Orochi yelled.

The gigantic skeleton hand then streached upward slightly as a gigantic Ox skelton arose,it was Enox,Gigantic Skeletal Ox.

A bony ninetails wrapped around cub,who was now in a throne made of bones and darkness. The ninetails then gained flesh muscles and organs in a instant.

Cub rose his sword. “Judgement has been dealt,Yamato No Orochi…your setence shall end…WHEN THE UNDER WORLD FREEZES OVER!” Cub yelled as Enox released a fiery blast.

“YOU SHALL REGRET THIS!!” Orochi yelled as he glew then exploded,finaly defeated.

cub streached as his bony minions turned into Rose petals. Cub arose from the ruins him and Orochi fought in,pokemon cheered as the sky cleared,the reign of Orochi was over…after 100 long years…

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RIBBON.
Y U NO SHOW BASIC PUNCTUATION AND CAPITALIZATION D:<

Saphy, Ontop, Dragon, Me, Sinacar, Bird:
You’re all in this.
DONOTDISSAPOINTRICU.

what? i capitalized all the beginning of setences and most of the names. what do you mean by

‘Riku’ be mad? D:
Angry Riku is a bad Riku
Don’t be a bad Riku, Riku.

:3

(Thank You)

LolSapphy.

Skeletons began to arise around cub,the sky turned dark,clouds swirling like a black hole. A gigantic hand rose out of the ground and slammed down on Orochi.
And clouds swirled like a black hole.*

“grr…no! wait! ill change my ways!”
“Grr…! No! Wait! I’ll change my ways!”
asdfffff.

Asdf…Qwerty…zxc-nah that sucks,

//youtu.be/http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYnsfV5N2n8

I had no other choice…maybe.

Also,

There is a comma, so it could also be.
Skeletons began to rise around Cub. The Sky turned dark, the clouds swirled like a black hole.

(Personally I would have written that…actually something more like ‘‘The clouds swirling pattern resembled that of a black hole’’)
…Ye-aahhh.

Runs away from possibly agitable Riku

thx fer accepting it, riku

… and fer letting me be gold.

I told you that my devouring of your soul was ''Accidental!" And I’m sorry!

(Just kidding…I’m just- not sorry. >3)

By the way Riku, what level are we and do we need to put down our moves. (How many can we know anyway?)

huh…didnt notice that.

… it better be. >:D
/eatsoul