COMIC - Latent Origins: [Ch. 3 ~ P31]


Latent Origins is a story about finding out what you are and where you belong.
Latest Page: Page 31 - Booyeah

Chapters
[spoilerCh1: Balloon Box Express:1as0kcql]Page 1 - Cloud Parcel
Page 2 - Play with that Elsewhere
Page 3 - Camp Chrono, Day One
Page 4 - Dreamcatcher"s Scripture
Page 5 - I forgot how…?
Page 6 - Strange Scribe
Page 7 - Cliffhangers
Page 8 - Queeny Wasp
Page 9 - Staredown: Lotad v. the Queen
Page 10 - Interruption!
Page 11 - w8 w0t
Page 12 - You Flippy Bird
Page 13 - I got to
Page 14 - It had to be done
Page 15 - LOTAD ROLL: ESCAPE FROM THE TERROR
Page 16 - Kane You Believe It??
Page 17 - The Loving Top Man
Page 18 - YOU"RE GOING TO WAKE HER UP
Page 19 - My Name is What?
Page 20 - Write then, Write there, a Villain was Born.

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[spoilerCh2: Theft:1as0kcql]Page 21 - u got MEME"d ON haha
Page 22 - Hella More People
Page 23 - KYAH! …Is that Beige Walls?!
Page 24 - wwww
Page 25 - Mailing Error
Page 26 - Just Don"t Try, Ricu
Page 27 - w8 wot x2
Page 28 - Contains No Lore
Page 29 - Contains No Lore p2
Page 30 - RIP

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[spoilerCh3: Confiscation:1as0kcql]Page 31 - Booyeah

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[spoilerCool FAN Art Things Made by the People:1as0kcql]Stick - By Ren

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[spoilerFRIENDS OF THE COMIC:1as0kcql]

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I started this project with the intention of giving its predecessor actual meaning and respect. I looked back at the story I told. I recalled every detail and character and saw everything as a jumbled mess. It had no real plot, or substance. The entire story was handled poorly, I will say. I called it finished, but clearly there was so much more, and a lot unexplained or terribly explained. There were so many possibilities. I could have taken the story down a much better path, had I not been mesmerized by the competition back then. Maybe it would have been better? Compared to what I haven"t finished, the story was absolute rubbish.

What I am doing is nothing new. I"m only retelling a finished and old story. This isn"t to break the uncomfortable silence, or show off any talents (>implying I have any). It is to fix and bring to life the story that should have been told.

Name: Muse Spiritum
Species: Espeon
Personality: Calm, analytic thinker (Often weighing pros and cons), Social, Usually in a good mood
Gender: Male

Name: Shade
Species: Vulpix
Personality: Rather lazy. she may appear weak when she battles, truth be told she doesn’t try. She hates someone waking her up from a nap, this will make her angry and a battle will start, thus she actually does try.
Aside from her laziness, Shade can be rather caring. though talk too much and she will doze off. (yes she has mastered wigglytuffs trick to sleeping with open eyes) Though occasionally she responds to people with “ya, uh-huh, ok, yup, really?” If the situation is important than Shade will do her best to help, course taking a long nap afterwards. If a situation isn’t all that she just literally falls and sleeps, (she would say “cant go on anymore!”)
She doesn’t really mind hyper people, she actually has a lot of patients when she is wide awake.

Gender: Female

BOOP.

Name: Gemini
Species: Flaaffy
Personality: She may be sweet and kind at first glance, but inside, Gemini’s just… a monster. She’s a bit sadistic, but she also has caring feelings. She’s outgoing and cheerful, but sometimes, she gets TOO happy and ends up electrocuting someone. She fights with a frying pan. Yes, a frying pan. Dealwithit.
Gender: Female.

GEMINI’S BAAAAAAAAAck ck

Ohaidere.

Name: Grath.
Species: Pinsir.
Personality: Unlike most other Pinsir, he’s shy, quiet, and easily frightened, which causes him to get teased on a daily basis.
Gender: Male.

yey more comics
Hello.~

Name: Sonia
Species: Tangrowth
Personality: Sonia is a Tangrowth that likes to copy what other Pokemon say, so sometimes they think she’s a bit annoying. Sonia always tries to be the best in everything she does. She’s very kind and protects anyone is in danger. But, she fears Fire types.
Gender: Female

Name: Steven
Species: Drapion
Personality: Steven is an empty-headed individual, and relies on brawn more than brains in fights. A lot more. He bullies people a bit, not meaning to hurt their feelings… Steven’s just a bit of a roughouse. He doesn’t make friends easily, and makes a lot of cheesy jokes. On the inside of his mean-looking extrerior, he’s just a doofus who wants to make friends.
Gender: Male
Psst. He’s totally not based off of the Drapion in my nuzlocke. Noope.

Looks pretty good so far.

Good luck!

Name: Skarow Sinclair
Species: Shadow Jolteon
Personality: Shy, Timid, Naive, Easily Embarassed.
Gender: Male

This sounds SUPER interesting and I like your art work. Here is my ‘audition’.

Name: Kiba
Species: Poochyena
Personality: Kiba is, unlike any other of its species, shy. He tends to back down from conflict and is scared to stand out. Though he is trying to work on this. He doesn’t want to be shy and void of confidence. He wants to want day be a strong and confident Mightyena. Around others he tends to stick to the back of the group. Also when in battle he works more on his defense than he offense.
Gender: Male

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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Page 3 is up.

Lotad King is back in action

Name: Gado
Species: Gardevior
Personality: Gado was named after her species personality, Gado meaning Guardian. She is a mother figure and loves to help out others. She wont put up with any nonsense and doesn’t mind getting her hands dirty if it is to protect others.
Gender: Female
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Page #3, the two tents on the left. You seem to have a tile error. Two of them that is.

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Name: Umo
Species: Primape
Personality: Well, he has anger issues -likethatwasn"tobvious- and he is frequently sarcastic, egotistic, and at times a snob. Which is why he lives alone and doesn"t interact with many people.
Gender: Male
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mukai kaze mo kinisezuni susumi tsudzukeru ze

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Interesting. I have to admit some of your other comics weren’t that good, but I’m having high hopes for this one. ^^

Name: Rhyme
Species: Eevee
Personality: Rhyme. A rather brave Eevee. And when I say brave, I mean it literally. Rhyme always tries to be the brave one, no matter how scared she is inside. Even though she tries to be brave, it also comes with her being, or atleast, seeming rude. However, she is not a bad pokemon.
Gender: Female

Wow, I didn’t see those. Good eye.

You know it.

Page Four now exists.

Name: Gado
Species: Gardevior
Personality: Gado was named after her species personality, Gado meaning Guardian. She is a mother figure and loves to help out others. She wont put up with any nonsense and doesn"t mind getting her hands dirty if it is to protect others.
Gender: Female

Name: Rhyme
Species: Eevee
Personality: Rhyme. A rather brave Eevee. And when I say brave, I mean it literally. Rhyme always tries to be the brave one, no matter how scared she is inside. Even though she tries to be brave, it also comes with her being, or atleast, seeming rude. However, she is not a bad pokemon.
Gender: Female

hmmmmmmmmm

woah lotad

Interesting pages! I like them!

nice job! its coming together really well.

Sir Write doesn’t look weak o.o